| 1. Before beginning the essay, think of your life in a global
way. What have been the accomplishments, crises, obstacles related
to education? Take some notes and don't worry about the organization
of these random thoughts. Make sure you begin this process
early enough to gather useful information. Talk to your family
and friends about how they view you because they may see your
achievements more clearly than you do.
2. Is is appropriate to talk about personal crises, but your
essay should tie these in to how you overcame them and
what this has to do with education. For example, you may
cite an accident that left you disabled. You may want to elaborate
on the recovery process and how it contributed to who you are
now and why education has become important to you because of this
traumatic experience. The reader should get a sense of your stamina,
resilience, creativity, and other personal resources that would
lead him/her to believe you could draw on these reserves to be
successful in achieving your goals.
3. your essay should have an introduction, middle,
and conclusion. Begin by introducing yourself and what
you intend to say; the middle should, in a more comprehensive
form, reflect what your introduction said you would discuss; and
the conclusion should sum up all the information in a logical
progression. You could decide to write your introduction last
so that it can be truly specific in its purpose.
4. It is not necessary to use sesquipedalian (foot-long) words.
If you do, make sure you are using them appropriately and with
the correct spelling. It is more effective to use ordinary
words in clear statements.
5. When you begin writing your essay, do not worry about
using all the correct words and phrases because this may block
you. Take a deep breath and let your self feel the freedom of
your won ability to express yourself. Keep writing without stopping
for "just the right word", and skip over anything that
doesn't come to you readily. Don't worry about spelling, content,
or correct English usage as it will keep you from saying some
important things about yourself.
6. After you have written a first draft, go back over it to be
sure that you have included specific experiences that are relevant
to your college goals. Make a good case for why you are unique
and how your experiences will help you with your college education.
Four-year schools expect you to be mature enough to extrapolate
lessons from experiences. What unique contribution will you make
as a student and as an alumni they can be proud of? It would be
a good idea to answer this question in all of your personal statements
regardless of where you apply because it indicates vision and
self-esteem.
7. When you are ready to write your final draft, go back
to number 2 through 7. Check for spelling, grammar, and logical,
linear thought progression. Does everything relate to your educational
goals in the conclusion?
8. Again, do this exercise early enough to that you will
have time to write the essay as well as time for other people
to proof it and offer you some feedback.
9. If this feels overwhelming, go back to number 5 and take a
deep breath. Remember, the subject matter is you, and you
are the greatest authority on this topic. Write from your heart,
and worry about all the intellectual concerns when you are working
on the finished product.
You can do it!
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